Getting noticed for your heartbreaker novel: ePub or publisher

Bard raised a good point on my last post that publishers may not be willing to take on my novel if it has been released for free on the web.

It's a good point, and one I have considered very seriously.

For me the decision worked like this.

1. The chances of publishing an unwritten novel is 0%

2. If I don't find new ways to motivate myself (20 years remember) the chance of the novel being written is 0%.

3. Therefore I need to find new ways to motivate myself.

4. I found the feedback from writing my blog, motivating.

5. I will try to harness this motivation and use it to write my novel.


However

6. Putting my work online risks someone stealing my work.

7. Anonymity is a higher risk for new writers then theft.

8. There are legal avenues to address theft, if it were to occur.


Additionally

9. I am a fantasy lover, I want to write a trilogy or more.

10. Publishing Book 1 online may just get me enough to be noticed and read by an 'important' person who will pay me a lot of money to write book 2 and 3.

11. Since I don't yet have a written novel I will publish what I do have as a serial in the hope I can use 5 to achieve 10.


Ummmmm...... yeah right.

Dreams, dreams, dreams

With fear and trepidation I release my opus... sort of...

About twenty years ago, I started writing a fantasy novel with a friend. It was based on a D&D campaign I was dungeon mastering. My friend used the ideas, characters and my plot outline, to write and I then rewrote his initial words, until eventually we had a 1st draft of Book 1, at near 1000 pages.

My co-author grew less interested but I've never given up. I've also never finished the project. Over the last decade I started re-imagining it, and rewriting, and rewriting, and rewriting; starting at the beginning over and over again. I'm further from the end of Book 1, then I was a decade ago.

The novel is now far removed from anything recognisable as D&D, and is very much my vision; and my torture.

By age 40 I vowed to have Draft 1 ready for publication. That vow passed uncompleted in January 2011.

I want this story out of me. I want this dream realised.

But my motivation is fickle, and family and work life all encompassing.

As has been said, 'writing is 10% inspiration, 90% perspiration'.

I noticed while blogging how comments you all gave me, and seeing a few followers appear, inspired me to write more.

I started to wonder if this might be what I need for my novel. Writing to my own strength of will, has brought me nowhere. Perhaps I need to try a different tack.

So I've joined scribd. And uploaded the prologue of my novel.

I have nine chapters written, around 200 pages. My intention is to release one chapter / month, like a serial, and hopefully, here's really hoping, I will find the perspiration to just keep writing.

So click and read Mandorla: Gods and Elves - Prologue - The Death of Stem Faar

And feel free to comment, correct and criticise - either via this blog or a new email address I have started
mandorlastory@gmail.com

It is thus with great fear and trepidation, I attempt once again to see this dream realised.

Links to Wisdom: Alive and 560 links kicking!

I know there have been some concerns about the demise of some OSR blogs. My own blog posting has fallen to zilch.

Blame no gaming group, work, family, Civilization 5, my fantasy novel opus, Civilization 5...

Whatever the case, Links to Wisdom is still going strong.

Just look below at the number of links to the contents below

• Introduction (to the game) 15 links
• Player Character  135 links
• Spells  45 links
• The Adventure  47 links
• The Encounter  44 links
• Monsters  109 links
• Non Player Characters 16 links
• Treasure 44 links
• Preparing and Running the Game (Dungeon Master Information) 86 links
• Inspirational Sources 22 links

Now I haven't checked every link but probably have checked more than 200. Of the links I have checked only one closed blog (sadly Axe and Hammer) and one link that needed fixing. That's not bad.

So provided Alex Schoeder isn't going anywhere (don't go anywhere Alex) the Links to Wisdom wiki is strong and here to stay. It's for everyone who wants to help preserve some of the memory of the OSR blogosphere. Feel free to add to it at anytime.

Rescue the Princess

My four and a half year old son was badgering me this last week to play Warhammer.

I knew he was a little confused, as I haven't played Warhammer in years. What he was recalling was the D&D campaign I played for my friends a few months back, and the battlemat and Warhammer miniatures we used. Since the campaign sessions often finished late I would leave the battlemat and miniatures out, so the next morning my son and seven year old daughter would see them, we'd roll a few dice and kill a few baddies over breakfast.

So today when he requested Warhammer I thought - perfect opportunity to play D&D.

I quickly printed off the 2 page KIDS' D&D HOUSE RULES BY JIMM JOHNSON  and two of his character sheets and we were ready to play!!!

I'd been saving these rules for just such an occasion. These rules really are fantastic - two pages long, 4 classes, no abilities.

With no time at all my son was the knight Flipback Bomb and my daughter Eliza the warrior princess.

My daughter was especially taken by the mission - rescue the kidnapped princess (a real princess).

We had great fun - the map and adventure I made up in my head 5 minutes before playing. I wanted monsters and combat, but also some traps and puzzles.

DM notes
A hermit had told them of a cave in the mountain where he thought the princess was.
Opening corridor was dark - they needed to use their torches from their equipment list.

Both would roll simultaneously for opening doors: 1-2 doors open and surprise any opponents.
1st room - two goblins - combat

West room - led to the kitchen where a goblin and orc were. In the kitchen was lots of raw and cooked meat. There were a few barrels - one barrel contained two ropes (originally one but sharing isn't the 4 year olds strength).

East room - led to a room with three cages against the opposite wall. The middle cage had a hungry lion in it. At the back of the lions cage was a door.

My daughter took great delight in thinking she could distract the lion with some food - and then remembering the meat from the kitchen!

Final room - a deep pit with Princess at the bottom, with three skeletons around the outside and one boss skeleton (since my son wanted to use a boss miniature)

My daughter used her rope to help the princess escape during the battle and the princess helped tthem defeat the skeletons.

A fine rescue. Apart from the tears from my daughter when reduced from 6 to 3 hit points. She still tells me she had great fun.

All up, I'm not sure who had the most fun - the son, the daughter or me.

My son wants the next mission to be - rescue the King... (he's trapped in an enemy castle....)

Should encumbrance reduce armor class?

The June / July talk about dexterity, AC and shields had me wondering about the role of encumbrance.

From my understanding of D&D's early history AC was just that, the armor class, that was determined purely by the type of armor worn.

Then things like dexterity started to modify AC, until it really should have been called Defence, since it was gradually being divorced from the armor type. This is even more apparent if we wish to consider the proposal that dexterity = armor class.

The appealing motivation of such a change is NOT to become more simulationist, D&D combat is at it's best when abstract, but it is increasing incentives to player choice that is most attractive.

In one of my most popular posts ever I wrote of my frustration that starting at Level 1, characters could afford the best non-magical armor in the world, plate mail. Why then should they care for chain, ever?

I still stand by that proposal and in my recent campaign the cost of armor is drastically increased.

Armor            AC   Cost     Enc

Leather           7       5        150

Chain Mail     5    150       300

Plate Mail       3    400      450

Shield            -1      10      150

When I played Keep on the Borderlands my players even contemplated casting a sleep spell on the town guard just to get their hands on some chain mail! The first two gaming sessions, if they had a theme, would have been the "Search for better armor'

So the new costing was a great success.

But eventually characters that are allowed armor find plate mail and that's the last they contemplate any other armor source. And certainly wearing no armor by choice, is just nonsensical.

It is no wonder then that D&D combat rules struggle to model for unarmored duelists, firearms and a myriad of other additions to a campaign setting you might wish to add.

It was thinking about firearms that led me to some new considerations on this topic.

It was the ability of firearms to penetrate armor that led to the fall in armor use in the late middle ages. I say fall, because armor certainly didn't die out as a concept.

The famous Australian bush ranger Ned Kelly in the 1800's put some armor to some short but iconic use.

In the end the lumbering knight gave way to the mobile cavalry, pikemen and red coats.

Protection was replaced by mobility, because in the world that was emerging, mobility was the new protection.

Some have modelled the power of firearms against armor by giving firearms armor penetration. I think this is an ok model if it is not based on a false conclusion. If I'm being shot by a bullet I don't suffer more damage because I am wearing armor, I suffer less. The reason wearing heavy armor against firearms on the battlefields may not be such a good idea, is because I am less mobile and more likely to have the bullet (or shot) hit me in the first place.


Now this could be modelled as weapon (firearm) vs AC.
Chain Mail +1 to hit
Breast Plate and helmet alone +1
Plate Mail +2
Plate +3


But what we are really saying is not that the bullet is better at penetrating plate armor then chain mail, it clearly isn't; no we are concluding that someone in plate is less mobile then someone in chain mail, and thus easier to hit. But, any visit to a historical reenactment, or the UK Royal Armoury in Leeds, will quickly dispel the myth that armor decreased in mobility in nice step wise increases in armor strength. So it isn't really that easy to say plate mail is much worse than chain. It might be, but it depends.


In D&D however, we already have a rule system in place to deal with issues of mobility, it is called encumbrance.

Now to a question? How often in your campaign does the character's mobility effect game play? Honestly, how often do your players get chased so that their movement rate is the difference between life and death?

I would think that most players, if they think of encumbrance at all, it is not in terms of their character's movement rate but in terms of how much they can carry.

Many of us are lackadaisical when it comes to keeping tabs on movement rate and it's enforcer, encumbrance. But with Raggi's rules or my own adaption of Delta's 150cn = 1 dungeon stone rules (outlined again below), encumbrance is fairly easily accounted for.

So how could penalties to AC based on encumbrance incentivise player choice?


1. It makes chain mail +1, or elven chain, a worthy, even superior, competitor to plate mail.


2. It makes a high dexterity character consider their armor choices carefully


3. It allows heavily encumbered characters to be missile targeted more easily (opening up firearms as a deterrent to heavy armor)


If we adapt from B/X


ENC             Mv          AC penalty       
<400             120'               0                     
401-600          90'              -1                      
601-800          60'              -2                      
801-1600        30'              -3                     


B/X armor rules
Leather         AC 7       200cn
Chain mail   AC 5       400cn
Plate mail     AC 3       500cn
Shield          -1 to AC  100cn


Or from my last post an alternative chart that emphasises the roll of initiative:

Movement (Encumbrance) as determined by feet/turn	Penalty
120’	None
90’	-1 personal initiative
60’	-1 personal initiative and - 1 AC vs missile weapons
30’	-2 personal initiative and - 1 AC vs missile weapons
15’	-2 personal initiative and - 2 AC vs missile weapons and - 1 AC vs melee

Perhaps, just perhaps, player consideration regarding what type of armor to wear, just for a moment, there was umm... maybe I won't wear this plate mail.


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My encumbrance rules for strength

Notes regarding movement, strength and encumbrance.

Max Enc in Stone Weight 150cn = 15 pounds = 1 stone weight		Encounter Speed / round
1/5 Strength =		40
2/5 Strength =		30
3/5 Strength =		20
4/5 Strength =		10
5/5 Strength =		5
>5/5 Strength =	>	0
Run speedx3; explore speed x3 /turn

Encumbrance effects on Movement

120’ up to Str*1/5 in dungeon stone (1 dungeon stone = 150 coin encumbrance)

90’ up to Str*2/5

60’ up to Str*3/5

30’ up to Str*4/5

15’ up to Str*5/5

Can carry an additional 50% if not dead weight (eg piggy back) or dragging along the ground

Adapted from Delta's encumbrance rule:

150 coins = 15 pounds = 1 'dungeon stone' (as opposed to the normal 14 pounds = 1 imperial stone)

Strength score is multiplied by a fraction to determine max encumbrance for that given movement.

eg Strength 3, max encumbrance 3*5/5 = 3 dungeon stone = 45 pounds = 20kg or 30 kgs dragged along the ground. I think this might be reasonable for the AVERAGE 9 year old, who using grip strength as a real life comparator has strength of 3.

eg strength 10 average, max encumbrance 10*5/5 = 10 dungeon stone = 150 pounds = 68kg (I think this is pretty acceptable, I'm average, I could barely move with 68 kg unless I was piggy back someone, and I think my 50% increase rule, allows something almost realistic but simple to apply.

eg strength 18, max encumbrance 18*5/5 = 18 dungeon stone = 270 pounds = 122 kg.

Personally I think olympic weight lifters can be said to have strength exceeding normal human range.

Tinkering with Weapon Speed

This began as a tinker with creating B/X rules that incorporate weapon speed. For better or for worse I didn’t stop until I had re-imagined B/X combat. I am sure it owes inspiration to many sources; even Alexis. I hope it adds strategic choice to combat without being overwhelmingly crunchy, though I suspect crunchy is the adjective most will choose.

Re-imagined Combat Sequence

All combat is based on 1 round, which is made up of 10 segments. Combat order is determined by personal initiative.

At the start of combat each character and NPC roll for personal initiative on a 1d6 and the DM rolls one initiative roll of 1d6 for each group of similar monsters.

Initiative is modified by:

- dexterity bonus / penalty

- halfling bonus +1

- flying +1

And at DM discretion:

- charging +2 (lose dexterity bonus to AC)

- larger than man size -1

- giant size -2

- any monster the DM feels is especially quick or agile (+1 to +3)

- higher level fighters will gain bonuses instead of increased numbers of attacks per round

Additionally encumbrance has the following penalties:

Movement (Encumbrance) as determined by feet/turn	Penalty
120’	None
90’	-1 personal initiative
60’	-1 personal initiative and - 1 AC vs missile weapons
30’	-2 personal initiative and - 1 AC vs missile weapons
15’	-2 personal initiative and - 2 AC vs missile weapons and - 1 AC vs melee

Once personal initiative is determined the DM calls for actions able to commence at segment 10 and then moves down 1 segment until segment 1, after segment 1 actions the combat round ends. No personal initiative can ever exceed 10.

A combatant can act on the segment that is determined by their personal initiative minus the Speed Factor of the action they are attempting. Any actions by any number of combatants occurring on the same segment are considered simultaneous.

Speed Factor (SF)	Action attempting
1	Fist, open hand, claw, move 10% allocated movement for the round, drop item/weapon
2	Dagger, shield (1d2 damage), access belt, brace to receive a charge with spear or polearm, crossbow (still takes a full round to reload), pummel with sword or weapon hilt (1d2 damage)
3	Short sword, bite, throwing an object, bow
4	Normal sword, battle axe, access sack
5	Two handed sword, attack with polearm, access back pack

For example Brian rolls a 4 for personal initiative modified by +1 for dexterity 13 = 5. He is wielding a normal sword (SF 4) so that he could attack only when the DM declares actions for segment 1 (5-4). If he was wielding a dagger he could have attacked on segment 3.

Any injury received before the combatant has carried out their action results in the loss of 2 from personal initiative.

So if Brian was hit on segment 6 his personal initiative will have been reduced to 3 meaning that he would be unable to attack even with a short sword (3-3=0) but if armed with a dagger he will still be able to attack (3-2 = attack on segment 1).

A combatant can take as many actions as their personal initiative allows ie multiple attacks are possible. This is modified by: each successful hit reduces personal initiative by 3 and each miss by 1. Missile weapons are unaffected by this modification and suffer no penalty for a successful hit or miss.

Dual weapon fighting – unless the combatant has an extremely high personal initiative the main advantage of dual weapon wielding is that it allows a choice between two weapons with different SF.

Shields – not only do shields confer an AC bonus, shields can also be used as a weapon (1d2 damage for standard shield) with SF of only 2. A successful hit upon an opponent might result in the opponent losing the ability to attack that round.

Pummelling with sword or weapon hilt - allows a combat option for weapons when the personal initiative does not allow enough time for a full attack.

Brian is armed with a normal sword and shield. He again has a personal initiative of 5. He could attack on segment 1 with his sword but could choose to attack on segment 3 with his shield. If he elects to attack with his shield if he hits (-3) he will now have a personal initiative score of 0. If he misses it will be 2, allowing a possible remaining action/s.

If a combatant carries out no action for an entire round and additionally has received no damage, they are +2 personal initiative for the following round only.

Spell Casting

Spell casting is slightly different. Personal initiative is determined as above but spells take time to cast. Spell casting time in segments = Spell level*2.

Such that spell casting can commence on the segment corresponding to the determined personal initiative but must be vocalized over a number of segments equivalent to the spell casting time, and only then does the spell effect takes place. Any damage received before spell casting commences means that spell casting cannot commence that round. Any damage received during spell casting results in that spell being lost. A spell caster may only ever attempt to cast one spell per round. As can be seen high dexterity becomes important for magic users attempting high level spells. Unlike weapons and other actions however, spell casting can continue over onto the next round, commencing at segment 10.

Bryony, wishes to cast magic missile (casting time = 2 segments). She has a 5 for personal initiative.  She can commence casting on segment 5 and the spell takes effect (magic missile released) on segment 3. Any damage she receives in segments 5 or 4 will disrupt the spell.  If Bryony was casting a 3^rd level spell (casting time 6 segments), and provided she had not received any damage before commencing casting (which not only would result in the loss of 2 from personal initiative but prohibit spell casting that round), she could commence casting on segment 5 and the spell would continue into segment 10 of the following round (Bryony does not roll for personal initiative) taking effect in segment 9 of the new round.

If my alternate staff and wands house rules is used (see My Stuff) staves have a SF 5 and wands SF 2.

Anyone care to try this out?

PS: sorry for the lack of posts, still here, still reading my daily fill of OSR blogs, just haven't been inspired to write.